***Curtain raises for part three***
The moment of fear freezes and it stays on and on and on… Sarala could feel her soul tickling her tonsils to escape. She faints, into the scarred left hand of Kochapi.
With startled face and shock defined all over him, Kochapi tries hard to stay on his feet.
Why did Sarala faint when he mentioned his favorite books name?
Why did Sarala feel so cold in his left arm; the arm bruised in a freak accident at work 3 months before?
Does that scar he got 3 months back look so hideous?
Clogged with all thoughts he did not notice Sarala had opened her eyes and was now staring at him.
She had a drop of tear in her eyes and was trying to say something, something that broke into a thousand pieces before it came out of her shaped lips. Something that sounded, “I em dho…rry”.
Kochapi was more worried of dropping Sarala on the floor, than figure out what she was saying to him. He kneeled down and rest Sarala’s head on his lap. Still in a daze he asked her,
“What happened?”
“Why did you faint?”
There was only the deafening noise of silence and a blank stare between Sarala and Kochapi for a while, till the cracking noise of the door interfered. There stood Mr. Kuriakose. The sight of his daughter in the lap of an outsider and the passion, with which Kochapi was holding her, turned Mr.Kuriakose’s eyes into a fiery ball of anger. He clenches his fist to lay on Kochapi’s naive face. Before all hell broke loose, the piercing screams of adulterated language from Mr.Kuriakose, got every one else to the room.
Mathukutty chettan trying his best to hold back Mr.Kuriakose and Mrs. Kuriakose screaming, how her daughter was molested filled the last scene in this melodrama of love, innocence and “kallu”.
By now Sarala was clinging to Mrs. Kuriakose, her starched sari had rippled in a million places, her jasmine lie scattered on the floor, her oiled hair loose; and Mr.Kochapi; he stood still with bulging eyes and bemuse.
But no ending the story without “one tight slap” on Kochapi’s naïve face.
FATAAASCH………………….
Kochapi still stood with his mouth open and bulging eyes.
But Sarala was bleeding from her mouth. The slap fell hard on her left cheek.
[silence]
[a voice from the dark, spot light on that one person]
“Oorama undo ee mukham?” [Suresh Gopi style]
Mr. Dizoza stood at an arms distance, pointing his index finger at Sarala [now clenching her bleeding face]
“Oorma kaanilla” [Still Suresh Gopi style]
“I was in the dark that day”
“…………. but my SCAR was not”
He had pulled back his jubba sleeves enough to reveal that distinctive SCAR ON HIS LEFT ARM.
“And you thought I will never recognize you?”
“I have Sarala, I have”
“At last, after so many years of searching, I find you”
“To finish what was started 2 years back”
Sarala could not believe what she saw. That was the scar she dreaded, the scar that gave her night mares, the scar that stayed. And today the same scar was back to ruin her life; in the form of her future father in law.
Mr. Kochapi still stood with bulging eyes and open mouth,…
That’s when his father Mr.Dizoza screamed again.
“You never paid me Saralaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……………”
Taan taaan tadaaaaan…………………
***Curtain falls.***
Thursday, July 28, 2005
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oh yes, typical JKR ishtyle. u do have a future, u do!!!
Last summer's debt comes to haunt poor Sarala? :)) This was too good an ending. The twist in the tale was awesome!You do have a future in suspense thriller potboilers.
Wow ! Loved reading the two posts. Came here with great reccomendations from Silverline.
whoopie, thanks a tone kutty, silverine and sushil body for the appreciations.
BTB I am not a fan of HP books or its author; so the comparison is unfair.
And writing THRILLERS, hah.. I will write about my quest to break celibacy, some time.
@silverine: you will be paid a minimal fee for referral. Hey and the PREFACE offer, in my book stays ;-)
nice story! really liked it, though i started off with the second part.. he he.. :-)
@Anoop: Please keep the referral fee and have some kallu with it when you go home next. My treat!!!( methinks you will get about 20 ml max). The Preface ahh... now that I accept.Thank you.
aliyaa adipoli !lol!
Oru smole doubt... Did the wedding take place finally ?? Did Sarala include the kallu money with interest in the Dowry to ammayiappan Mr.Dizoza
Did Gulf Kochaapi take over Mr.Dizoza's abkaari business
Neway Kochapi seems to be a man ahead of his times..wearing 42 inch bellbottoms in 1947!!!Jayan look ; 20 years odd early
Hoping there is another sequel to the story a la Godfather III ; can call it Koch(aapi)father III
Who knows........ "Kallu ho naa ho??"
@Silverine: I will brawl all perils and tax officers to get you the 20ml of nectar; yes i will, i will, i will (thats 3times rght).
@Flash: "Aliyaaa"..... Thanx a ton for the comment.
And.., yes the marriage took place, after all debts were cleared after which they lived "HIGH" ever after.
Kochapi was a gulf returnee da, things were way ahead in fashion, in Gulf those days, be that bell-bottoms or full body-cover hats.
A sequel could be on the way!, not "Kallu ho na ho" instead "I know what KALLU did last summer".
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